Chapter 15: Bulls-eye

I was paralyzed there. I couldn't move a muscle. It felt like I had been there forever waiting, waiting, waiting. I felt like I was breathing through a bag, unable to get the oxygen I needed. Images flashed through my eyes: the monster, Laila, trolls, elves, Klein and the sanctuary man. What if more sanctuary creatures came in my room right now? I start worrying. Then I hear footsteps and start panicking. They're getting closer and I can't move. I can't move! I hear my doorknob slowly creak open. Then my whole body shuts down from panic.

I wake up what seems like years later, I'm alive! When I heard those footsteps coming I thought for sure I was a goner. I turn my head to see Klein. He was the one who came in the door! Faintly I hear him speaking, calling my name. I slowly sit up and become more aware. “Klein?,” I asked, “What happened, how long have I been here?” Klein stared at me with a scared look, “I've been with you for 5 minutes now, but I'm not sure how long you were here before hand. I waited 2 hours for you to show up for training, but you never arrived. I came to check on you, and found you paralyzed here. Are you ok?” I think about and then realize I'm perfectly fine, the pain is gone completely. “I'm fine, really I'm okay.” I reply. “Uh-huh, I'm taking you to the head elf.” Klein says, and before I can protest hes already scooped me up in his arms and carries me into the corridor. “Klein!” I say, “Seriously I'm perfectly fine, I'll visit the head elf, but at least let me walk!” He gives me an un-sure look but then gently lowers me to the floor. We walk until finally reaching a graceful glass door. Klein knocks, and the head elf comes out, that same bland look on his face. “How is it possible you've only been here for four days and your back to me again.” I gave him a death stare and he laughed it off. “I found her in her room passed out and paralyzed.” says Klein interrupting the head elf's rude laughter. The head elf immediately cut off his laughter. “What happened? How do you feel now? Do you remember any of your feelings before being paralyzed?” he said questionably. “Well, I fell just after getting breakfast, I felt an electrifying pain and just, fell. After being there for awhile I passed out and the last thing I remember is that Klein was in my room.” I say. “These symptoms are very familiar to me, a few others seeking the tree have had them. It is a side-effect of your curse. This makes your journey to the tree even more rushed, because your pains will only get worse with time,” replies the elf sorrowfully. Great I think to myself, more problems. “Then I want to get to that tree as fast as possible.” I turn to Klein. “I'm going to training.” I quickly walk away hoping he doesn't stop me. He doesn't. He just joins me in silence, both of us walking. His hands brush mine but I push him away. I need to get out of this place as fast as I can without a distraction like Klein. We finally arrive at the training center. A tear escapes my eye. No I can't get attached to him, I won't get attached to him, but somewhere deep down I know I'm lying to myself. I pick up the bow and position it in the way Klein showed me. I shoot and graze the target. “You've been taught well.” He says. I give him a glance and turn away. “Whats wrong?” He asks sincerely. “Why are you mad at me?” “I'm not.” I mumble under my breath. “You know I don't believe that, is there anyway I can help?” I bite my lip and draw my bow once again, but this time I hit the bulls-eye.

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Chapter 14: Roses are Red

Chapter 14: Roses are Red

I woke to a bird chirping. Slowly I lift my head, recalling on all the events of yesterday. The training, the spear, the bow. The bow reminded me of when Klein rested his hand upon mine and the shock that shivered through my body. I smile. Slowly but surely I toss my aching legs over the side of the bed. As I rise, a gurgle flies through my stomach. Wow, I never had supper last night. Blood-souls do eat food, but only when we can't survive off of blood. I circulate the room, searching for a snack, all I find is a room service pamphlet. Elves are really top class! The pamphlet is embroidered with a thin layer of red velvet, and every word is precise calligraphy. Scanning it, I finally decide on waffles with strawberries, what a delicacy! I carefully handle the gold phone and dial for room service. After placing my order, I hop in for a hot bath while waiting for it to be delivered. I remember my first bath here clearly. So I lock the door before turning on the tap. As if that was enough to stop one of the Sanctuary. While I soak, my thoughts recline back to Klein. I'm confused about my feelings for him. His aura makes me uncomfortable, but when we kissed I felt something like never before. Will everything be awkward now? Or will we kiss again, because I think I would like that. Either way I know I will have to face him at training today. My thoughts are interrupted when the doorbell rings... Oh crap! The room service, I almost forget. I leap out of the bath and wrap myself in a polyester bathrobe, then proceed to the door. Immediately after I opened the bathroom door, I could smell my breakfast. It was truly mouth watering. “Coming!,” I yell, slowly hopping towards the door. I wouldn't want to slip! At last I reach the door and start saying “you can put the food down...” then realize its not room service. It's Klein. Fantastic. Things just keep getting more and more embarrassing, I hustle to cover up more. “Well, hello. Expecting someone different?,” greets Klein. “Actually I just ordered room service, they should be here any second,” I reply trying to sound as calm as possible. “Yep, I have it for you!,” he said pulling a tray out from behind him, “Even comes with fresh strawberries and whip cream!” Well, I should have guessed Klein could be room service, but apparently he prepared this especially for me. The whipped cream was placed in little hearts all over the pancakes. Above all of it, 3 beautiful roses lay in his hand. “Oh my goodness, thank you! This looks amazing, I could smell it from a mile away!” “I'm glad you like it. Training was good yesterday, I'll see you again this afternoon.” And with that he left, yep totally awkward now. At least he said he liked training yesterday! I carry the silver tray over to one of the many couches, and turn on the TV. I reach to take my first luscious bite, when suddenly a sharp pain flies through me! I seize up everywhere and my beautiful breakfast crashes to the floor.

Chapter 13: In Training

Chapter 13: In Training

The head elf then gave me a quick nudge and we hurried down the dark hallways. I swear everywhere you looked there was shadows looming over you. We finally arrived in a large room that was dimly lit. There were cobwebs and a thick layer of dust covering every surface. I skimmed the room seeing old training equipment like swords, spears and shields. The equipment was help up on bars of silver, almost like it was waiting for me to come and select my weapon. The elf nods his head towards the spears, “Try hitting the target over there, lets see what we have to work with...”

Slowly I approach it, hoping not to embarrass myself. I trained a lot as a kid, it's natural for a blood-soul. I just knew I could hit the target right in the center, just like I will hit the creatures from the sanctuary directly in the heart. I select a spear with a gold handle engraved with elvish writing. I pretend to launch it but it feels too heavy. I place the spear back on the bars and pick up a ruby encrusted spear. I suddenly drop it, boy that ones heavy! I look down, praying it's not broken, but it's fine. Not even a scratch. I then glance over the possible weapons and find they all look too over the top. I'm about to give up and use a silver one when I see something bronze catch my eye. I go to the end of the bars and find a spear with a moss handle. It feels soft in my hand and is as light as a feather. I then quickly turn around and charge at the target and release the simple spear with all my might. It flies straight through the target. I turn to see not the head elf but Klein watching me. I was proud of my accomplishment, I've now made a good impression. Also, it wasn't even that hard to hit, being a blood-soul and everything. “Impressive,” said Klein, “I heard about your encounter with the sanctuary creature, the held elf went to, let's just say... put it to sleep. Nasty things they are!” “Holy!”, I say surprised. “I didn't think that old grandpa elves were so vicious.” “You'd be surprised of what we're capable of ,” said Klein with his common sly smile. “Now that we know you can work with a spear, let's try some other things. Ever used a bow?” “No, I replied. I have no idea how to use one, it's not very well used in the blood-soul domain.” I replied, a little embarrassed. “Well, no problem, I think I can help with that! Let me teach you how, with my help you'll be an expert in no time,” Klein said with a hint of self-possession. He now passes me an emerald colored arrow, followed by a beautifully engraved oak bow. It looked just like a work of art. I hold it feeling a flush of color rise to my cheeks. After a few seconds he lets go and I attempt to hold the bow properly. Unfortunately I can't hold it properly, let alone shoot. Klein approaches me and positions my hand properly on the bow. His skin brushes against mine and a spark shoots through my body. “There, that's the position you should be holding it,” he says taking a step back, “Now I'll show you how to shoot.” Klein approaches behind me and guides my hand to pull back the arrow. The sparks are back. “Wait, he says not quite like that,” he says now in front of me. He gently motions the bow closer to my body, and then before I even know what's happening, he's kissing me. Passion is flowing through my body, his lips are hard against mine. My mind knows it's wrong, but I don't want him to stop. Then, he retreats, now his face is also flushed. In a slightly shy way he says, “I think that's enough training for today, you should go back to your room now.” That's it?!, I think to myself. He must be nervous. I turn to leave the training center and I can feel his gaze on me. The walk back to my room seems to take forever. I replay the sensation over and over again. Finally I arrive back to my room, I realize I am exhausted. Although I'm not sure if it's from training, or Klein. I plop down on the silk bed, wishing he was laying next to me.

Bow And Arrow

Chapter 12: Evidence and Emotions

 

 It's a man, but a deformed one. He has 3 legs and awful warts smothered all over his face. He has short dark hair, and a short stumpy body. Definitely not an elf, he was an intruder.

My first reaction was to immediately tie him up. I used some towels from the bathroom. Then I decided it was probably a good idea to get changed before seeing the Elves. Once I'm done that I'll bring him to the Elves, they'll know what to do!

When I return to the bathroom I see something crumpled under the porcelain sink. I go pick it up and am shocked by what I see. A picture of me lies in the palm of my hand. Then I notice the background where I can just make out a bridge. People have been following me... I decide I should probably search him for more evidence. I find nothing except for a badge. It says S. M. P. I know those letters and I know what they stand for. Sanctuary Mission Protector. He was one of the creatures following Alazar. He came to attack and invaded Elvish territory. Elves are very strong protectors, the Sanctuary is stronger than I expected. Quickly I grab the photo and badge, hiding them in my jacket. Then I commence dragging the heavy man to the head Elf. I don't get far because the head elf appears out of no where right before my eyes. He looks very concerned with a frown on his face. “We were smart enough to figure out we had an intruder, we were trying to find him... but I guess he found you first,” he said with shock. “Yes, he tried to attack me, but slipped and got knocked out. I didn't know what to do, but I found this and I though you better know,” I said holding out the badge and photo. “It appears that he is from the sanctuary and has been following me for a while,” I said trying to sound as confident as possible. I was scared, really scared. These people were after me, and my soul is dying. I don't understand why I got caught up in this mess anyway. Maybe it was meant to be. I'm always strong, even though inside I'm shaken. Sad, from the loss of loved ones, and scared for what's ahead. So now, heavy tear drops escape from my eyes. The Head Elf gives me a look of sorrow and says, “I'm sorry for everything that has happened to you. The Sanctuary is moving faster then we expected. We will do everything possible to keep you safe. Who knows how many there are, or how long we can keep them out. Your training must start immediately.”

Chapter 11: The Intruder

The first two things I noticed when I awoke later that day was: I was on a luxurious and incredibly soft bed and that Klein was kneeling next to me. I felt pain in my head and recalled the earlier events that happened. Oh no, mucho embarrassing. "How long have I been out?" I ask him. "Only a few minutes," he replies, "I carried you here," he said with a sneaky grin on his face. Gosh, he is totally desperate. "Well thanks, but I would like to be left alone now." "Fine, I will let you be, " Klein replies without hesitation. Well that's a relief, I think as he departs. I thought he just wanted to make my life miserable. I've never met someone whos made me that uncomfortable before. Wait a second! He carried me here! I must have hit my head harder than I thought. I stand up and look around the huge room. It was quite miraculous. The floor was sleek black marble, the kind that never gets dirty even if you walk in with muddy boots. The walls were a noble shade of silver that looked very elegant with the floor. I want a nice hot bath now, to relax my muscles before tomorrows training. I search for a little while and eventually find a grand bathroom. It contained a solid gold bathtub. Whoa, I never knew the Elves were so rich! But then again, they supply all the kingdoms. I open the oak cabinets and select an olive soap. I then turn on the faucet of the tub and watch as the crystal water flows out the tap. I really need to take this bath already. I finally sink my aching body into the 3/4 full bath. I'm finally relaxed...when suddenly I hear a creak in the main room. I jump and water splashes out of the tub. "Whos there?", I try to yell. I have to stay strong. No response. I'm definitely starting to panic. Then, a figure leaps through the door coming at me. I'm frozen on the spot and naked, I'm so hopeless. But they never reach me. The man slips on the split water and his head comes crashing down on the gold faucet, only inches from my head.

Chapter 10: An Embarassment

How was I supposed to reach the tree on time with all this training in the way? They can't seriously expect me to be able to defeat these things! “The training will only take 2 days.” said the elf with no expression in his words. “Well, thank you, for helping me survive the rest of my quest. I had no idea what was coming my way!”, I replied. “Training starts at 5:30 and continues until stars fill the sky.” , he said curtly. “Oh and I almost forgot”, he began to say as an attractive blonde guy entered the room, “This is Klein, he will be your personal trainer and will help you with anything you need here in Elven territory.” I laughed out loud at this, his name reminds me of “Calvin Klein”. He then mumbled something and vanished from the room. “Here let me lead you to your room, you'll plenty of rest for tomorrow.” says Klein slyly. “I'm sure I can find it myself.” , I say, while walking away staring at his long locks. His presence makes me uncomfortable. “Suree.. you know you're about to walk into a wall!”, he says, even though I didn't actually hear what he said at the time. Then suddenly BAM I smack into something and everything goes black.

The Unwanted: Chaper 9

Chapter 9: Bad News

“Is she awake yet?” I heard someone say as I slowly open my heavy eyelids. “Where am I??”, I am moan in pain. I sense tension in the room as I speak. “How's her heartbeat?”, I hear a voice ask. “Perfect, even though the surgery should have her at an un-normal pace.” “Definitely a blood-soul, just as I suspected.”, said a deep voice. Now I really need to know what's going on, what surgery? I don't remember being hurt. Just getting captured! I try to yell but it comes out as a squeak instead, getting caught in my throat. I see a man with long white hair and gentle wrinkles resting on his cheeks approaching me. “Hello, blood-soul. Welcome to the Elvish Territory. We are deeply sorry we had to meet by kidnapping you, but it was the only way to keep you safe.” Is this guy mental? How is kidnapping me when I was so close to the dang tree helping me? What a nut case. “You may recall when the monster tried to stop you from arriving at the tree. We would like to stop you as well, or at least help you for the dangers ahead. Things await you at the tree that you may not suspect. Your greatest fears.” “How do you know all this grandpa?”, as soon as I said it I regretted it. He flashes me a dirty look. Elves are supposed to be clever, they must be trying to help me. Why be so rude? Now I take my time to listen for an explanation. “I believe you have the persipian blade in your waistband at the moment”, he said matter of factly. “ Are you familiar with Alazar the great wizard?” “Well if you mean stabbing him and escaping, then yes I'm familiar.” “Well Alazar stole the blade from the sanctuary; they were after him, but now they're after you.”

Chapter 8: New Territory

We only spent two days together and yet I felt sad. I had finally met someone just like me, and now I had to finish my quest alone. At least I still have the blade and not captured by infuriated trolls. I should probably continue to the tree for both of our sakes. That's what Laila would want me to do. I took one last look at the Troll Territory with tears building in my eyes and continued my quest for the Tree of Glory. I have reached new territory, by the time it's dark. I stop at the "Safe Soul Inn" for the night. In the morning I trapped a rabbit and drank. I feel empty, like I have a hole in my heart, after losing Laila. After walking another while I finally reached the land of the Elvish, shimmering trees shower above me. For a minute I feel nearly happy from this pleasant vibe, wishing I could stay her for good. I know I must complete my quest and tell Chad the bad news. I wonder how he'll take it... That was my last thought before I'm captured! I am being dragged at a high speed through the woods. Through the insane speed I yelp in fear but I knew no one could hear me.

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Chapter 7: Captured!

But the boards weren't cracking because they were old, they were being cut by trolls. Trolls are rising from beneath the bridge. One nearly grabs my foot, but I slice of it's hand just in time with the blade. I stab another two trolls in the heart a split second after. The board beneath Laila snaps, she starts descending through sky and lands in the grasp of a troll. I lean in between to boards and swing the blade vigorously , but just miss the troll's face. She is slightly too far below. I started sprinting, it was the only way to save Laila. If I can be fast enough, I can reach the end of the bridge and get under it instead. I heard grumbles behind me saying things like "Blade, blade wheres the blade?" Another voice said "She doesn't have the blade!" "Get the runner!" At this moment I increase my pace, I hear the heavy footsteps stamping a bit behind me. I reach the end of the bridge, realizing with despair that I don't have enough time to achieve my plan. Quickly I see a nook to fit in. I waited there for hours as the trolls pass. Finally, I leave my hiding place. When I come out, Laila is gone. If she is being held captive somewhere I could still save her. I start wandering around Troll Territory. It didn't take long before I heard the screams in the distance. I slowly approach a large cave, hiding behind bushes. The worst that could happen is I get caught too. I'm now at an angle that I can see inside the cave, but stay hidden. There is Laila, dangling above a pit of lava. I hear the trolls torturing her for information on the tree. She wouldn't say anything? Would she? Everyone knows only blood-souls can know about the tree. Then I see something devasting that will haunt me for the rest of my life, they slice off both of her feet, then her thighs. Then something happens that shocks me. Laila says "The-the tree is 6 miles from here." Oh no. But this wasn't enough for the trolls. They need details. So they cut open what's left of her torso. Her guts are spilling into the lava. Now she has no reason to live so I pray she won't say anything else. Now they stab her directly in the heart. Last but not least they slice of her hands so she falls in the pit. I watch my first friends body disintegrate before my eyes.

Chapter 6:  The Bridge Of Twists and Traps

Alazar shook violently and crumpled to the ground. He was now unconscious and incredibly injured, but not dead. I take the persipian blade from his cloak and proceed toward Laila. "Nice plan, couldn't have done better myself.", said Laila, "By the way, you left the antler". "The persipian blade is all I need to defend myself.", I said with confidence. "No need to be so cocky", said Laila. "C'mon we better get moving". We walked until morning. The only thing guiding us was our laser vision eyes. We finally approach a bridge full of twists and traps at dawn. It leads to the troll territory. "Kay, get ready to use the blade", Laila said. "Of course, but first we need to get across this bridge.", I said sincerely. But I spoke too soon. Suddenly a giant log swings down hanging from ropes, nearly smoking Laila and I in the heads. With our blood-soul reflexes, we were able to duck fast enough. But the nature didn't stop there. Vines grew up from the ground, wrapping around Laila's stomach. I quickly take the blade and slice Laila free. Slowly we approach forward, waiting cautiously for the next obstacle. But this time we couldn't see it. A insanely high pitched noise echoed through the valley. I was paralyzed by the sound, frozen on the spot. Somehow Laila wasn't as effected by the sound. I feel something being shoved into my ears. Earplugs. Laila came prepared. I do remember her telling me that she's traveled in this area before. This must be the reason she brought the ear plugs. We continue down the bridge. We've been walking for quite some time with no traps. Then, a crack. The boards beneath us were snapping.

CHAPTER 5: Alazar's Deal

"Thanks", I said, "Can we have it???", I reply sarcastically. "Well, where's my payment?!", he asked in a snarl of a voice. "Oh, of course, what would you like?", said Laila in a slightly too cheery voice. "I demand to transfer powers with your friend.", he said in an expressionless voice. WHAT?! I'm thinking inside.. but I use my control to keep calm. "Uhm, well let us discuss it for a minute.", I said pulling Laila aside. "So I'm hoping you can tell me what this freak is talking about?!", I say in shock. "He wants to suck your blood. When he does this, he takes your powers", Laila replies. Okay.. No way I'm doing that, but suddenly a plan comes to mind. Laila stares at me in worry, but I have confidence in my plan. I slowly approached Alazar. I was taking deep breaths to prepare for what I was about to do. He approaches me with a greedy smile on his face, what a creep! I can feel his breath on my neck now, about to sink his teeth into my neck. When suddenly I stab him in the stomach with my antler.

Alazar The Wizard

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Chapter 4:  A Detour

"It's the death warriors, they've been following me, they're trying to find the tree.", she explained. "But only blood-souls can find the tree! We need to get away from here immediately, but first we need to get something to drink. Let's go, I smell prey about a mile from here." So we leave the underground and proceed through a sorrow forest. The shadows of the willow trees deliver a gloomy environment. It was nearly 3AM and the sky was as dark as my raven black hair. "Stop.", Laila says, "A moose is near." And then she disappeared. A second later I heard a loud groan in the distance. "Come over here!", Laila yelled " He's so delectable." We gathered around the moose slurping ferociously in enjoyment. Lots of energy was needed for the long journey ahead of us. Laila pulled off the moose's antler and sharpened it on her dagger. "Here take this", she told me. "Gory beasts lie ahead, always be armed." We start to slickly glide through the forest with the blood-soul 's silent but speedy pace. My enhanced senses told me Laila could be keeping something from me. When we reach the slimy saloon, she comes to a halt. "What's the matter?", I ask. "We're supposed to meet someone here, he's delivering me something special to help with the journey.”, she replies without hesitation. "Why didn't you tell me before?", I asked suspiciously. "Well, we had to take a 2 hour detour to get here, now were even later getting to the tree. I figured you wouldn't come if I told you." "You got that right, I thought I could trust you!", I exclaimed. " Well he's bringing us the persipan blade, necessary to beat the trolls on the way", she proclaims, "You should be thanking me. Without this blade we would've died getting there." "Don't be so sure..", I said under my breath. Suddenly footsteps behind us. "He's here.", Laila says. Except it wasn't him. A giant boar with bloody drool escaping from the corners of his mouth, lunges out from the bushes behind us. We both dash backwards, stunned and hopeless against this gigantic beast. Before we could think farther, an arrow stabbed through the back of the troll. "I just saved your guts", a deep voice says from behind the falling beast. "Who are you?", I find myself asking. "My name is Alazar", a cloaked figure says, "I have brought you the persipian blade."

The moose

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Chapter 3:  Laila, and possibly others.

My wound was instantly healed, a power of the blood-souls. "Thanks", I said quizzically. "So your headed to the tree?", she replies, "Because lucky for you I happen to be heading there to. You look like you may need some help. But only if you're willing to forgive for stabbing you." , she said sarcastically. "Okay..", I said considering her offer, I really don't know where I'm going, so she could be helpful to being along."Why are you going there anyway?", I say questionably, I still need to gain one last piece of her trust. She smiled slightly and said, "I'm meeting someone. My boyfriend, his name is Chad." "Well, I suppose we could travel together. Two is better than one anyway I suppose.", I reply uncertainly. "Great, we better get moving then. Anyway I'm Laila.", she said with her arm outstretched. I return a firm hand shake, "Nice to meet you", I say. " So which way is the tree from here? I got kinda lost after falling through the hole back there." “What are you talking about, what hole?", she said with worry. "The trap door you set up like 20 meters from here.", I reply. "I didn't set up a trap... They're coming."

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The Unwanted: Chapter 2

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Chapter 2: A Girl Like Me

 
As I walked in the silence of the night, a cold chill went down my back. I was getting closer. I felt a pang of relief, because I thought I was being watched. Then I realized it was a black cat lurking in the darkness, I've reached a new town, about 10 days away from the tree. Or at least, that's what I thought. Suddenly I fall through a trap door into darkness. I could feel the shadows swallowing me up, and I thought, "Okay, a little detour here." I roll my eyes, now I have no idea which direction I'm headed.

I can see a dim light in the distance and I start to approach it. All I can smell is cloves and rosemary, what an odd combination. This is the smell of blood-souls. I must be close to one of my kind. That's when I see her. A girl with blood red lips, smokey eyes and bleach blonde hair. Definitely someone like me. She looked out of place, a beautiful girl with a sharp dagger. I jump behind a rock to hide, but my footsteps echo through the tunnel. "Who goes there?" , she asks, "This is a blood-soul territory." While staying hidden in the shadows I reply, "I'm a blood-soul too". Out of the corner of my eye I see the girl approaching my hiding place. I blink, and suddenly she's next to me. I wail in pain as her dagger stabs into my left thigh.

"That's a lie!", she exclaims, "Why are you here and what do you want?!", she roared. Trying to stay standing, I stammer, "I-I'm on my way to the tree of glory, I told you, I'm a blood-soul." "Then why don't you have the scent?", she questions with her knife at the ready. " A monster darkened my soul, it fades the scent. This is the reason I'm headed for the tree, to regain my soul." I felt her grasp on my shoulder lighten slightly. "Well, then let me clean up your wound.", she said. She bent down and observed my wound. Then her mouth locked on it and collected the leftover blood.

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The Unwanted: Chapter 1 A Dead Soul

There once was a land full of miraculous events and supernatural creatures, this land is where I grew up. I used to thrive for a normal life but when I first tasted blood, I changed my mind. Blood is something you'll lust for from the first moment you first taste it. It's what keeps us as live. The blood-souls. How could you not want something so alluring and pure? Although there is one thing I will always want more, to reach the tree of glory. Small pieces of my soul disintegrate as I speak, from my curse. It is slowly but surely killing me. But one day I shall be freed from my curse, with the help of the tree.

On my 13th birthday, the monster put this incredible haunting upon me. I am now 16, obviously finding the tree has been more difficult than expected. Although I can feel I'm getting closer to reaching my destiny. The monster swallowed the life and pleasure in me and left me like a marionette. Hanging by a thread until I finally reach the tree. Until my course turned upside down. Yesterday the monster returned to me once again, offering me a deal. The deal was to quit my quest to the tree and he'll return my soul. But if I continue to pursue the tree he will take away my will to love. This makes me curious to why he does not want me to reach the tree. So I decide to continue my quest and trade my will to love. Fore, no one would ever love a blood-soul.

Blood Soul 101:

I was born a blood-soul, it runs in my genes. My mother was a blood-soul, never met my father. No siblings. Unfortunately the monster took my mother's life when I was only two. I have learned to strive alone ever since. One day, I would to meet my father... confront him for leaving my mother alone.

As a blood-soul, drinking blood keep us alive. But don't be fooled, we are no vampire. No fangs or all that crazy bs about coming out at night! We suck blood and have paranormal speed and sight.. besides that we are a normal human being. Nobody knows about us, we live in our own land of sorcerers, blood-souls, trolls, elves and other mystical creatures. The land of Pentravon.

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